I've put the W.A.S.P. scripts on hold for now until this rugby/slasher series is finished. I'm working on part fifteen right now and the juices are flowing, so to speak.
UTTERLY RUCKED 10Logo by Guy Landry
by David Tulloch
Patton: "Where the hell is Paddy? He's missed roll call."
Latimer: "It's okay, boss. He snuck out to go get some protection."
Latimer: "A gun. Paddy's gone to get himself a gun."
Patton: "You've got be joking. He'll be pushing shit uphill to find a gun in Eketahuna?"
Latimer: "He reckons he has his ways. Says we'll be safer if he's armed and dangerous."
Patton: "He may have a point."
Paddy shows off to an unseen person (the killer). We see Paddy from the point of view of the killer, as though through their eyes. It's night, so the light isn't great, which will be useful later for hiding the identity of the killer.
Paddy: "Oh, hi there. You sneaking out too?"
Paddy: "Not that there's much to find in this dump."
Paddy: "I went looking for a gun, you know, for protection, but all I could was these."
Large title frame of Paddy wielding two machetes in a scissors pose.
Paddy "They'll have to do, eh."
Part Ten, Scissors Move
Paddy shows off for the unseen person.
Paddy: "Now if trouble comes I'm the one everyone will come crawling to save them."
Paddy does some moves with the machetes.
Paddy; "I'm the Irish ninja, me."
Paddy gets himself in the foot with a machete.
"Aaahhh! Fuckin' crap!!
Paddy: "Holy mother ... I think I chopped my toe off."
Paddy: "Jesus, Joseph and Mary. That hurts ... "
Paddy" "Give us a hand would you?"
The POV moves a bit closer, to show the unseen person has moved toward Paddy.
Paddy: "Thanks ... just let me lean on you so I can hop over to the ... "
Paddy looking around at the POV in shock and pain (as he has just been stabbed).
Paddy: "Ugh! What the ... !!?!!
POV Paddy falling to the ground, a pair of scissors in his back.
Paddy: "Mother of ... !"
Large frame. Paddy lying face down with a pair of scissors in his back. The killer (hard to see because of the light) with the machetes in gloved hands, holding them high ...
... then a crossover (scissor) move (swish) that leaves Paddy headless. A large frame.
Paddy's body and separated head in the foreground . The killer standing in the background, still unidentified.
Next: Counter Rucking