Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Script: DARK BAY THREE (page 2 of 6)

These one-sided conversation pages are my favourite ones on Dark Bay. Not sure why.

They are easy to setup, I guess.

They are fun to layout.

They are fun to write.

I guess that's why then.

Below is the original, very minimal script. Obviously I edited as I went.

Page TWO
One-side phone conversation, again.

Yes, sir.

No. I'm sure they're suns, not flowers .

I think it's a easy mistake to make, sir.

No, sir. No ID yet. But at least ...

No. I don't think she was local.

Yes, that does complicate matters.

Yes, sir. I'll get on it.


What was that, Ma'am ... Sal?
We've got some work to do, Pukey

We need to go talk to some old hippies.

Continued tomorrow ...

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