Friday, June 25, 2010

Script: DARK BAY TWO (page 3 of 6)



I'd like to thank my hand model for this page, my darling wife. There are just some things you can't get a Playmobil to do.

Page THREE

3/1
Large frame of the new kid with takeout coffee.
Neil: Here's your coffee, Ma'am.
Sal: Call me Sal. You get sugar for me.

3/2
Neil: Eight. As requested.

3/3
(Sal pockets it)

3/4
Neil: I thought it was for the coffee?
Sal: Nah. I'm sweet enough.

3/5
Sal: Or don't you think so?
Neil: Um ...

3/6
Sal: Right! I'm going to go talk to the family that used to own the land.
Neil: What About me?

3/7
Sal: You're going to go to the house of a single, educated woman and look through her ...

3/8
Sal: ... collection of newspapers.

Continued tomorrow ...

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