This page shows the limitations of the 'taking photos of toys' approach to comic book visualization. This should be a dynamic action page with our heroes in mortal combat with a giant rat. Playmobil don't do dynamic that well. Nor does a crazy catnip-stuffed cat-toy mouse.
Still, it is odd and funny looking. Which is good enough for me.
Page TWO
A big fight page as 'dwarf' tries to block the rat and swing his axe, while the giant berates his companion. Make it action-packed, with them leaping and bits of the sewer being demolished by the rat, etc.
2/1
Opportunity: "A simple bounty on rats, you said."
2/2
Opportunity: "Just a quick in an out, you said."
2/3
Opportunity: "Easy money, you said."
Knox: "Well now I'm saying hit the damn rat."
continued tomorrow ...
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