Monday, July 19, 2010

Script: DARK BAY FOUR (1 of 6)



The start of another episode ...

There will soon be a website where completed strips can be read sequentially, but I'll continue to post scripts on the blog.

This episode reveals he true geekiness of 'Pukey' (a.k.a. Neil).


Page ONE

1/1 TITLE frame, large view of the bay from above.
Annie McInnes (off): Sorry, Sal ... My father was never one for keeping records ...

1/2
Annie: He was a Doctor, not a file clerk.
Neil: Ha ha! That's just like Star Trek.

1/3
Sal: What?
Neil: It's something Doc McCoy might say.

To be continued ...

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